Black is the Night

THIS IS NOT A FINISHED PRODUCT. This site is for me to post a rough draft of our impending novel, in the hopes of receiving feedback which will help with the editing process.

If you read it, I appreciate any comments, as they fill me with joy and unicorns. I even love getting criticism in this one case, and those who know me are aware that I can’t handle getting criticized in most areas. Knowing that fully, I am posting this in order to receive criticism so that I can improve my work and refine my writing.

The genre of the story is sci-fi/dystopia, as well as action, comedy, and even romance(though I’m bad at writing that). If any of these things are within your scope of interest, please give us a chance!!

However, if you are offended by the concept of evolution, excessive violence, or sarcsm, this story will probably make you angry. Just letting you know.

I’ll give you a summary so that you can decide whether or not to read it.

The only survivors of a massacre that annihilated their whole society, Shay, Calum, and Lacy have spent the past six years just trying to survive. They are alone in the world… or so they thought. When another survivor comes on the same day as an extremely tempting job offer, they can hardly refuse either.

It’s hard to get by when you’re a different species from everyone else, after all, and one must take full of advantage of every opportunity that comes your way. And when your species is illegal, well, let’s just say, there are no rules to play by.

If you’re interested, please start here: : https://achansan.wordpress.com/2010/06/26/chapter-1-just-doing-my-job/


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