Written for dVerse “MTB New and Old in a Palinode“
The requirements are:
2 verses (numbered or even subtitled), minimum of 9 lines per verse, equal number of lines per verse
one verse holds contrary views/feelings/proposals/arguments etc to the other
meter and rhyme is optional
and use one of the quotes provided as an epitaph.
It’s currently bushfire season in Aus, and we keep a close eye on the “fires near me” app for fires in our watchzone – so far so lucky this summer. We’ve been shocked and horrified to see the fires on LA on the news and my thoughts are with everyone affected there.
“It needn’t be tinder, this juncture of the year” Conor O’ Callaghan – January Drought
1. Old
Baubles scatter flecks of light,
over a charming Christmas scene
lit by the candles, burning bright,
tucked among the branches green.
Choose your candle, choose it well:
the length of time it stays alight,
your fortune for the new year tells.
So keep your candle in your sight,
and watch the flame burning bright.
2. New
We watch the flames burning bright,
forests, farmland, all alight.
This is the future the flames foretell:
smoke-hazed days, red moon at night,
a landscape turned into a hell.
Our choices have delivered this scene:
blackened stumps, burning bright,
what once was pleasant, calm and green,
is embers scattering flecks of light.
Once I’d written the first few lines, I thought I’d keep the rhyme going, then reverse it in the second stanza. Great prompt Laura, thanks!