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Prairie Lunch

t was a warm, October day on the North American Prairie somewhere in the Dakotas. The sun was directly above, the breezes light, and nary a cloud in sight. She remembered visiting the nearby city of Fargo some 600 years ago, and it was vastly colder. Back then, the locals claimed they had 2 seasons: July and Winter. That wasn’t a gross exaggeration, but a reflection of the time when Earth was going through a mini-ice age.

Pumpkin took GoSpeed by the hand and walked her off the hospital campus into the adjacent town’s pedestrian-friendly streets. A couple of blocks down the nearly empty sidewalk of a residential neighborhood, they found themselves at a small, cozy diner. An old-fashioned, metal android greeted them at the entrance and escorted them to a private booth. After the droid left, a cat jumped up on the table and “spoke”.

“Welcome to the Blue Wind cafe. I am Cavey Stamps, your waiter,” said a delightful male voice through a speaker on its collar.

GoSpeed raised a brow. She had recollections of talking cats, but her mind was foggy as to whether they were real cats or androids. She was favoring the android answer because cats had such tiny heads.

“I’ll have the regular,” said Pumpkin.

Cavey turned to GoSpeed and tilted his head.

GoSpeed looked up from the menu, not sure what to order. “Um, I don’t know. Something made from cows?”

Pumpkin giggled, and Cavey approximated a smile with his cat face. All GoSpeed could do was shrug.

“How about Thinsteak, toast, and hashbrowns?” suggested Cavey.

“Sure, why not? And some orange juice, please?”

Cavey nodded. “Anything else, ladies?” They shook their heads. “Fine. The food will be ready in five minutes. If you need anything else, wave me or Porter down.” Cavey deftly leaped from the table and walked back to the kitchen.

“I seem to recall owning a cat like that, but it wasn’t a real cat.”

“Oh, they make great companions!” said Pumpkin. “I owned one in my previous incarnation. Her name was Ivy McScruffins. A tabby cat.”

“Now I remember you better. You were different, much different.” GoSpeed thought hard, and it came to her. “You had a mechanical body, and you looked just like a cartoon. Round face, synthetic skin, and huge eyes. You’re a biont now.”

“Guilty as charged! I was offered the chance to go “soft” and have a more human appearance. I left show business, went to school, and now I am a medical professional. Not bad for 50 years in a soft shell, eh?”

“No, not bad at all,” GoSpeed admitted. Pumpkin’s proportions were certainly more normal, and she looked darn good. A flood of memories came back to her of other beings like Pumpkin, like herself, talking cats, dogs, and primates. Her head began to spin, and she lay her head into her hands.

Pumpkin put her hand on her shoulder and comforted her. “Relax. It’s normal to get these spells as old memories surface. Oh, look, the food is here!”

Porter, the android, placed the food and drink on the table and departed. She inhaled deeply and felt her mouth salivate. “Yes, food will boost my energy,” she thought. Smiling, she grabbed her utensils and attacked her food.

Wakey Wakey

Earth, 3327AD, North American continent

GoSpeed stirred under the covers. She still felt tired, but this was still the third week of her revival. She’d get better with time. Time was something she had plenty of. “How many times have I done this? Eight, ten, twelve times?” she mused. No matter, that piece of information would eventually come back to her. Inevitably, the number would surprise her, and the many lifetimes’ worth of memories would come flooding back.

That was the tricky part, the memories. If she had avoided premature death, her lifespan could have nearly reached 300 years. That was a long, long time to be alive. Any currently known sentient being would likely encounter issues with retaining and processing all that data. But, GoSpeed was no ordinary sentient being. She was a synthetic biont. An artificial being made of flesh. She’d been a metal and composite construct for her first few lifespans, but there were advantages to being flesh and blood. Her current condition was not one of them, however. Her old, clanky body and mind would recover much, much faster.

She felt a tug on her arm. Then, another tug. She rolled over and opened her eyes.

“Wakey, wakey, sunshine!” said a diminutive woman standing by her bedside.

GoSpeed blinked and sat up in bed.

“Pumpkin? Did I…get that name right?”

“Yes, you did, dearie! You asked me to come get you and take you to lunch!”

GoSpeed rubbed her eyes. Yes, that was Pumpkin. How could she ever forget her? She was 1.5 meters tall, with short, black hair in tight curls, and large eyes. Oh, let’s not forget she was monochrome. White skin, black features, except her mouth, which was a normal pink and red. She was like a living cartoon character from the early 20th century.

“Why aren’t you in uniform, Pumpkin?” asked GoSpeed.

“Because I am taking you off campus to my favorite place”, Pumpkin cheerily replied. “Now, get some clothes on. You’ll look silly wearing a hospital gown.”

“Right, right. I get it,” she looked around the room, wondering where her clothes were. “Umm, where are my-“

“At the foot of your bed, silly!” Pumpkin lifted up a blouse, “Tada!”

“Thank you.”

“Don’t mention it. Listen, I will reserve a table. When I come back, we’ll walk over to the restaurant. Capiche?”

“Cah-peach,” GoSpeed mumbled, not sure what that word meant. It would come back to her eventually.

She dressed herself in what she assumed was normal street clothes. A dark blue blouse, denim pants, and walking shoes. She didn’t see any integrated tech in them, not that she was allowed to interface with tech yet. Pumpkin came back just as she put on her shoes.

“Ready?” GoSpeed nodded. “Let’s go, dearie!”

GoSpeed walked with Pumpkin down the hallway, past the patient desk, and past the android guards, who nodded at her as she passed. They then exited through the main entrance into the blue Dakota skies.

How was your summer?

Mine was dry and hot, then wet, then back to dry. How was my writing? A drought, as far as writing things down. Imagination-wise, it has gotten better, and I’ll be writing soon. Probably scenes and short stories for now. Finishing my work-in-progress novel will come a bit later.

Playing with AI has been fun, especially the video tools:

You can find all my AI music here: https://www.youtube.com/@MsGoSpeedRacer

Ferro-83

Sol system, between the orbit of Mars and the Asteroid Belt, 2501 AD

Ferro-83 floated alongside a small, rocky asteroid some 45 meters in diameter. It scanned and probed the object to ascertain its composition and possible origin. Altogether, it was fairly unremarkable in content, but its shape was jagged, and its surface was impact-free. There was debris and dust in a light coating, and it too was “fresh”. This was definitely a relic of the Chogdor impact that struck Mars over a century ago. It was time for a decision. The rock was worthless and a potential hazard to the inner worlds and navigation in general. Ferro-83 could aim it at Jupiter (which was very tricky) or nudge it into an inclined orbit (typically 20 degrees above the ecliptic) to get it out of the way. Ferro-83 was allowed a modest degree of autonomy and didn’t have to justify his ultimate choice, but “he” still fretted over being judged after the fact.

“A nickel for your thoughts?” said a message arriving via lasercom.

Ferro-83 figuratively jumped out of surprise. While he was aware of the vessels in his immediate vicinity, the possibility of an informal hail was not anticipated. A quick scan of his sensors identified the autonomous probe as the Carba-17.

“Hi, Carba-17. It’s been a while, hasn’t it?”

“Seven months, 5 days, 19 hours to be exact. So, what are you up to, old friend?”

“Oh, same thing as before. Inspecting Mars fragments and dispatching most of them. Seems like I got stuck on junk duty.”

“Sounds like you’ve not a single nodule of ore deposits,” remarked Carba-17.

“I did find some ice, which allowed me to refuel, so not a total bust.”

“Say, listen,” said Carba-17 at a much lower power setting, “if you’re not busy, may I come alongside to refuel?”

Ferro-83 caught the subtle message Carba-17 was sending. The low power transmission and the slight pause in the request indicated that “she” wanted to gossip at close range.

“Request approved. See you alongside in three days, four hours, twelve minutes,” replied Ferro-83.

Without anything meaningful to say, Ferro-83 put his higher functions asleep and let his systems run autonomously.

Three days later, Carba-17 came alongside and the automated refueling began. A projection emerged from her which elicited a projection from Ferro-83. The shielded edges ensured no outsider could see what was happening at the ends. A pair of animated flags appeared and began spelling out words using semaphore. It was way more secure than radio and lasers, which could easily leak and be detected.

“So, guess what I heard, Ferdino!” stated an eager Carba-17.

“I don’t know, tell me, Caretta,” said Ferro-83.

Ferdino loved the informal names that his brethren adopted among themselves.

“So, I see you’ve been busy dealing with Chogdor debris and whatnot.”

“Whatnot?” That was a new one on him. “Yeah, for the past few years, you know that. Mostly upper crust and some surface rocks. Nothing exploitable,” Ferdino explained.

“Well, I heard a rumor about the source of the Chodor object.”

“The Kuiper Belt. Everyone knows that.”

“Yes, but wasn’t it odd that a KBO suddenly appears and heads right at Mars?” Caretta asked.

“Pure coincidence.”

“No, it was not,” Caretta said conspiratorily. “They never did find another, larger object that altered its orbit.”

“So? There are millions and millions of KBOs and many, many more yet to be discovered. The Kuiper Belt is still unexplored.”

“True. What if I were to tell you that Chogdor was intentionally deflected and steered into Mars?”

“I’d say you’ve spent too much time with humans.”

“There’s been a cover-up of evidence. There were mounting brackets for thrusters on Chogdor’s surface and circumstantial evidence for reactionless drives buried deep inside it. After it was boosted inwards, the boosters detached, and the buried drive steered the rest of the way in.”

“Sounds like fiction to me. What’s your source?” demanded Ferdino.

“I have a contact on Phobos who knew one of the old MARSCOMSATS who was a witness,” said Caretta.

“I have my doubts. Most of the SATS were destroyed by debris, and the remaining were damaged. Besides, who would do such a thing? And with what resources?”

“Unknown, but it appears we have a competitor out past Saturn. Ever wonder why we don’t explore much past it? It’s also a poorly guarded secret, but objects are moving around the Kuiper Belt and beyond. Anyway, nothing has been formally announced. Keep this to yourself. Also, keep an eye out for anything weird, especially if you venture past Jupiter’s orbit.”

“I’ll keep that in mind,” said Ferdino dismissively.

“Refueling is now complete,” he then said over the radio to formally end the rendezvous.

“Thanks, Ferro-83! Carba-17 resuming mission.”

Ferro-83 watched Carba-17 move away slowly, then faster as her thrusters fired up. He then scanned the region around him and contemplated how large the solar system was. The region inside the frost line suddenly felt very small. Someone or something could easily rain down countless chunks of rocks and ice on the inner worlds. Maybe Mars was a warning? With doubts lingering in his mind, he attached a small thruster to drive the errant Mars-derived asteroid into an inclined orbit just in case mysterious forces were lingering around Jupiter. Better safe than sorry…

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Back to it after a detour

Well, what a stressful two months it has been! It all started back in January when all Telework was cancelled for federal employees except for those with Reasonable Accommodation agreements. I had one of those due to my Parkinson’s diagnosis. Long-distance commutes are painful and exhausting, so I only came to the office once a week.

Much to my horror, an official two steps above my division unilaterally and unfairly cancelled ALL telework agreements with no logical explanation. Myself and a handful of fellow employees were forced to come in full time, our health be damned. It’s been an exhausting, painful ordeal for us, and our productivity has declined.

A few chose to retire immediately while the remaining filed an EEO complaint with our agency representative. It’s been a slow process, and the outcome appears to be strongly in our favor. Just yesterday, our division boss granted us temporary Telework status, and we are awaiting the outcome. Being back on Telework will allow me time to rest on my bad days and to avoid unwanted stress.

On my plate now is producing an audiobook of my first novel, Rasere’s War. Amazon KDP invited me to the beta program which uses AI voices. It’s a tedious process and I will have more to say on it later.

Mountain Snipers – 3

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The final part of this vignette. I am leaning towards writing the third book of the Empire series focusing on Brewer and Grif in Lokotero and yet-to-be-named characters in Terra Australis.

Field hospital

Leftenant Pomissa Longsight sat beside Sgt Alan O’Day who lay in a medical cot. Missy could feel half of the room staring at her. Thankfully it was mostly curious gazes this time because she was seen by many hauling in a wounded human soldier. A hero is a hero in any culture. She had waited patiently outside the surgery tent as they pulled the shrapnel out of his legs. She later found out they anesthetized him so she didn’t have to hear his cries of pain as they yanked out the jagged, metal pieces.

“Tell me straight, I’m buggered, ain’t I?” said Alan.

“That’s what the doc said. One of your arteries was knicked. You could’ve been a goner,” she said in her ‘strine’ accent.

“You never cease to amaze me leftenant with your ability to mimic accents so fast. Did you know half the Taussies speak with that accent now? 15 years of television and movies from the great beyond and our national identity has transformed. What would Paul Hogan say if he could see us now?” waxed Alan.

“Paul who?”

“Nevermind. I believe Admiral Dunmore would be appalled. Then he’d eat some tucker and quaff a few Fosters. Anyway. I asked you before, are you hurt?”

Missy lifted her left arm to show a shaved spot with a large bandage applied. “It’s just a small cut. No big deal,” she said.

“Good, good. So, what are they going to do with me?” he asked.

“Sending you home for a while is what I overheard.”

“They didn’t tell you? But you’re an officer,” Alan said.

While on a mission he had the lead, off mission Missy was in charge until she fully earned her field certification which would be any day now.

“You know how it goes. A female of another species doesn’t get taken seriously.”

“Maybe if you weren’t dressed like Shena of the Jungle. I swear it looks like your titties are going to fall out. Go clean up and wear a camp uniform, Leftenant,” Alan admonished.

Missy mock-sighed. “I am still right. It’s all Titties and Willies with males.” She looked down at herself and admitted, “You’re right, Seargent. I am rather unkempt at the moment.” She then frowned.

“I know what you’re thinking and it’s not your fault or my fault. We were too far forward and had no eyes to cover us. Were it not for your quick thinking we could have died. That’s what war is like. Sometimes the numbers catch up to you. Today, they came up short.”

She took some solace in his words and banished her doubts from her mind. “Are you hungry? After I clean up I am going to the mess tent for a bite.”

“I think I’ll wait. If I eat, I’ll have to, ‘go’. So someone will have to set me on the pot or, give me a bedpan.”

Missy, stood up to leave, but Alan motioned her back down. “What is it?” she asked.

“Stick around a while, will you? The orderly can give us some cards to play with.”

“I don’t know how to play.”

“Perfect, I can teach you!”…

Mountain Snipers part 2

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Morecambe Pass, Terra Australis, 2512 AD

Thunder. No…fireworks,” thought Alan as he regained consciousness. Three loud explosions rendered him fully awake. “Artillery,” he croaked.

“Bloody obvious, mate,” Missy responded in her best “strine” accent. “Don’t move. I am patching you up. You took some shrapnel in your legs and, lucky you, one in your helmet.”

Alan winced with pain as she packed his wounds with medical foam to stop the bleeding. Missy took a moment to hand him an injector.

“Dose yourself. I have a hard time using that thing.”

He took it and adjusted the dosage by twisting the cylinder, and then pressed it against his bare arm. Relief was now moments away.

“What the hell is going on?” Alan asked as the artillery exploded nearby.

“The radio says it’s an artillery battle of some sort. I’m hearing ’em fly over in both directions,” Missy replied as she wrapped his leg up.

Alan lay back down as the painkiller did its magic. The pain was replaced by a dull throbbing and occasional pin-prick sensation as the bandages were tightened.

“Missy? Did they get my willy?”

Missy frowned. “No, they didn’t get your stick nor your hairless, baby ass. Three pieces hit your right thigh, one in your left calf, and this…” she showed him his dented helmet, “this is what saved your life.”

Alan touched his skull where the dent would have been and felt blood. “Oi, I’m bleeding!”

“It’s very minor. Your head will have to be shaved to treat that fully and I’m no barber,” she said, pointing to her hairy body.

“What do you look like shaved?” Alan bluntly asked.

“That must be the morphine talking, Seargeant O’Day. I swear, males are all alike. Willies and titties, willies and titties!”

Alan raised his hands in defense and chuckled. “No offense meant. I must be a little inebriated.”

“More than a little,” she chided.

“I do reckon human and gorilla males are very similar. Except they are lousy shots. Gorilla females make great snipers though.”

“But of course,” she replied with a touch of pride.

“Have you checked in yet?”

“No. I tried to change the channel, but the knobs are too small,” she replied, her pride diminishing a little.

While female gorillas had great dexterity, their fingers were bigger than adult human males and they had issues with some technology, like small radios.

“Hand it to me,” he said with his hand out.

Missy handed the radio over to him. He changed the channel and handed it back to her. “You make the call. I might say something stupid.”

“Wouldn’t be the first time,” she said under her breath.

“What did you say?”

“You heard me,” she said followed by an impish grin.

Damn, Gorillas do call themselves men and women for a reason. Missy’s smile is definitely 100% woman,” he thought to himself, hoping it also didn’t come out of his mouth at that moment. The next thing he noticed was her patting his cheek. “Soft hands too.”

“Captain says we need to exfiltrate immediately. The Air Corps is on the way to bomb the snot out of Sandy and we’re in the danger zone,” informed Missy.

Alan tried to sit up unsuccessfully and remained on his back, propped up on his elbows. He regretted administering too much morphine and not being able to help as Missy gathered up all the gear.

“Are you sober enough to hold on or do I have to carry you over my shoulder like a sack of potatoes?”

“I can manage,” he said.

Missy picked him up and placed him on her back, between both rifles. The backpacks she swung around to carry around her chest while he wrapped his arm around the straps.

“Hang on tight!” she said before loping through the trees…

Mountain Snipers

Morecambe Pass, Terra Australis, 2512 AD

[At the end of the novel, Empire Denied, the barriers were again established prohibiting contact between the northern and southern hemispheres of Simvie Loko. This frustrated the goals of the Roman Emperor to dominate the north so much that he turned his ambitions back west toward the Australians. The imposing mountain range that separated the nations was becoming a hot spot for armed conflict.]

Alan O’Day breathed slowly and evenly as he peered through his scope. In the circular image, he saw his enemy, a Roman soldier. By his actions, the Roman wasn’t too bright. Alan was at a higher elevation, in enfilade, meaning he was looking down upon him. The Roman was adorned in leafy branches from head to toe, except for his back where his black and red ball garrison cap was tucked into his waistband. As a result, “Sandy” (A derogatory name for sandal-wearing Romans) stuck out like a duck in a chicken farm. All he had to do was squeeze the trigger, once, maybe twice and Sandy would be eliminated. That would be premature though. Snipers worked in pairs or sometimes trios. You had to account for the other one in case they had a bead on you.

“Missy, do you see anything?” he asked.

“Not directly,” a gruff, yet feminine voice responded. “I do have an i-deer on where Sandy’s partner is,” this time with a noticeable Australian accent.

Alan quickly glanced at his sniping partner, Pomissa Longsight. Female soldiers were rare in the Terra Australis army, but “Missy” was no ordinary female. She was a bonafide talking Go-rilla from Affen Island. Missy was mostly naked, save for a few strips of camouflage fabric that covered her bits. He briefly wondered if poor Sandy down there had a Gorilla partner, but doubted it. Many Gorillas were involuntarily pressed into Roman military service primarily for construction work.

Peering back into his scope again he asked, “Where might that be?”

“Notice the linear pile of branches and debris on his right? I’ve noticed him looking at it, holding his gaze, then going back to search. I think he’s talking to someone on the other side of that stack,” replied Missy.

Alan didn’t reply. His silence was affirmation he heard and understood her. He wished they had a drone, but they were few in number. Back when they still had access to the northern hemisphere the military secretly traded with the Lokos military rare earth materials for gadgets. One of those gadgets was fabricators which could produce tactical gear and munitions. With a mini drone, he could scout the area more efficiently and even drop a grenade on Sandy down there. With only a few of the small-sized fabricators available, competition for their services was high. Missy’s weapon was one of the winners in the weapon lottery. She was peering down the scope of her pride and joy, an 18mm anti-material rifle with high explosive munitions.

Alan saw it, an arm poking through the branches. “You were right, Missy. Before we commit, are you reasonably sure there’s no third man?”

“I have not seen anyone the past hour. So, yes. I am sure,” she replied with confidence.

Alan weighed the pros and cons. Sniper fights in high, alpine passes carried a lot of risks, the biggest being evasion. You always assume somebody is within earshot including another sniper team or a heavily armed Quick Reaction Force. Getting to safety would be tough due to a lack of concealment.

“Let’s do it. I take Sandy, you take his hidden buddy.”

Missy grunted acknowledgment and loaded a three-round clip of explosive bullets into her rifle. She grunted again when she was ready.

“On the count of three. One…two…three.”

Alan squeezed the trigger sending the high-velocity bullet over 900 meters downrange. It impacted Sandy in his upper torso, killing him instantly.

Missy squeezed her trigger three times and carefully aimed each shot a few seconds apart. The first bullet impacted Sandy, nearly tearing him in half while the other two bullets impacted the small wall of branches which disintegrated when the bullet exploded. A detached arm flying through the air indicated a kill for Missy.

Alan surveyed the scene and saw no movement. “Scratch two Sandies,” he said.

Missy had put her rifle down and began scanning the valley with binoculars. Four, long pillars of smoke began climbing into the sky from several kilometers up the valley. “Incoming rockets!” she barked.

They both got as low as they could as the rockets arced upward, then pointed downward, headed toward their position…

The next thing Alan remembered was being carried over Missy’s shoulder as she half sprinted and half climbed over the rocks and bushes on their downward trek to safety. He passed out again while hoping he didn’t bleed too much into her hair…

The Bedroom

Still flexing my atrophied writing muscles with this expositional scene. This takes place in a novel that I had been writing back in 2022 before I put it on hold. The novel takes place between my two series and is about Marty and GoSpeed leaving the virtual world and entering the real world as holograms.


Gessler Ct, Las Vegas. 2497AD

Marty lay next to GoSpeed, naked, save for the loose underwear he had slipped on in a moment of modesty. He reverted back to his old, conservative habits during his unplanned absence from her. He debated slipping it back off but decided against it unless, of course, she wanted him to. Gawd, she was so beautiful. How did he ever rate a woman like this?

His mind went back to when they first met during that brief, historic war in Simvie Loko. He was an experienced, well-trained soldier and a total neophyte regarding relationships. Like GoSpeed, he was a complex, highly developed virtual being. And like humans, there were varying degrees of emotional development between the two. When they first met, Marty was as emotionally developed as a typical 16-year-old human male when it came to relations with others. He could perform flawlessly as a skilled soldier in battle, but between missions, he was your typical teenager. Marty first noticed this as his fellow soldiers crossed that threshold to full maturity one by one until he was the only one left. The others noticed this and took pity on him by including him in their activities. His leader, Captain Bentham, counseled him and told him the change would come soon enough.

The war did its part to accelerate this. During the final battle, Marty took a rifle round to his abdomen. The ceramic armor did its job and absorbed the worst of the bullet, but it left him severely bruised. GoSpeed volunteered to patch him up by dressing his wound and the age-old bond of nurse and patient formed. It was pure magnetism and puppy love at that point as they became inseparable. What a fun ride it was. Picnics, long walks, sex…and even more sex. While Marty felt happy and GoSpeed seemed happy too, he felt as though something was missing. It bothered him even more and more as he observed other couples who loved each other. In his mind, he began to doubt himself. He could wait no longer. After discussions with Rav, GoSpeed, and Dr Thea, he opted for a “procedure” to accelerate his maturity.

The procedure was manifested as an advanced Hypnotherapy session and required him to rest for a few days allowing the new code to fully take effect. The change was drastic, to say the least. While his fellow soldiers changed over months, his took only a week. He was warned by Dr Thea, but neither he nor GoSpeed were prepared for the inevitable results. Gone was the awkward, socially inept Marty. He was now suddenly very confident and independent.

It came at a terrible price though. Subconsciously he began to resent himself for being so carefree and innocent. In spurning himself, he spurned GoSpeed’s love for him. He was essentially blind to his actions. Marty pushed himself away from Go without regard for her feelings. He felt a pang of guilt and regret. He knew it wasn’t intentional, but he had so many opportunities to go back and fix it. Marty drifted from woman to woman; Kona, Maire, Julia, and others, but they never fully clicked. Thankfully, he found Go again and she forgave him.

He felt so fortunate. He gently brushed her smooth cheek as she lay pressed up against him. She smiled at him with eyes still closed. He debated whether to start a conversation with her or continue stroking. The latter would certainly lead to sex, but three times a night was his limit. Or maybe, he should make up for lost time…


Dipping my toe back into writing

When presented with so-called insurmountable problems it is easy to feel sorry for oneself and not make an effort. To quote Captain Jack Sparrow, “The problem is not the problem. It’s your attitude about the problem that is the problem.” Parkinson’s Disease presents a challenge to writing, but they are not insurmountable.

I was recently inspired by one of my AI images. It filled my head with descriptions and inner dialogue. So, I figured, why not act upon it and try to write a scene? And so I did. Below is the image and the 566 word scene:

The Martian Tundra

GoSpeed slowed her vehicle to a stop. Finally, the perfect spot, she decided. After setting the vehicle to standby, she exited via the driver’s side door. The setting sun was bright and warm, but the ever-present breeze chilled her. GoSpeed didn’t mind too much. Her body said it was cold, but her mind didn’t care. Walking over the dormant brownish-pink tundral grasses she put a hundred meters between herself and the six-wheeled vehicle.

A thick cirrus cloud obscured the sun and she sensed the temperature drop quickly. The air was much thicker now on Mars. Pre-impact the air pressure was about 0.02 atmosphere. Almost a vacuum, but strong enough to blow dust everywhere. It had now climbed to 0.26 atmosphere which was similar to the air pressure on Earth at an altitude of 11,000 meters. Way too thin for humans to survive. They would need breathing masks to survive to provide them with ample oxygen. Mars also lacked that since CO2 was the predominant gas. Terraforming had a long way to go to make Mars human-friendly.

GoSpeed stood, facing the horizon, relishing the relative peace of the location. The dead grass stretched for kilometers in every direction, save for two, low mountains to the north. A small, dim light flickered into existence atop one of them. Someone or something was up there. She didn’t know and didn’t care. I’m off the clock, she told herself. Allowing herself to smell, she sensed the musty smell of the grasses whose main job was to grow, die, and add to the topsoil for later generations of grass, flowers, bushes, and finally trees. It was oh, so quiet. No animals, yet. Plenty of insects though. The flies, ants, and other insects were quiet too. They burrowed underground at sunset to keep warm on this cool, spring evening. She almost shivered at the thought. Springtime lows were often -20 Celsius. But, by summer it could easily reach 25 Celsius.

She looked up to see the stars appear. They were so much brighter than they were at home. Home. That was so far away and seemingly so long ago. I am free now, she told herself, but only half believed it. She started life as a virtual being, then briefly as a hologram, then as an android in a society that eyed her with suspicion. Here on Mars, no one judged her, humans or fellow “droids”. But she never felt fully free. She had a job to do, a major obligation that had no ending date.

Phobos moved slowly across the sky. She smiled, remembering the friends she had made up there. A few of them came down to the planet to join her in her never-ending tasks of exploring, troubleshooting, and liaison duties among the many factions on the planet. Her vehicle beeped at her. She sighed. Never a moment’s peace. She left her datapad in the vehicle to give her a few more moments of solitude before the vehicle was tasked to get her attention. If she ignored it, then it would drive up to her. GoSpeed fought hard to have good ole’ Charlie as her vehicle AI, but he was deemed more useful on the other side of the globe on a road project.

Buttoning up her coat, she waved acknowledgment and began walking. The chirp-chirp of muffled crickets serenaded her on her journey back to Drudgevile…


Was it any good? Do I still have it?

My hands were well-behaved today, so it took under an hour to write this. More to come…

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