Hello everyone. I’m delighted to announce the results of the twentieth 50-word competition on the theme of ‘Taking the biscuit’. It’s an English saying where someone’s offered something but they take more (they take advantage).
There were 15 entries from 9 writers this month, including 1 new to the competition, which is always lovely. Sadly that entry was disqualified for including the title length in the 50 words. Hopefully it hadn’t put them off! It’s always worth submitting the maximum of three to give the other two a chance, but do get the story itself 50 words exactly. No more, no less. Thank you! This does mean that the remaining eight entrants were all placed so won a prize. 🙂
With such a low word count it’s tricky to fit a whole story (start, middle and end) so they’re going to be snapshots. You may be planning on writing as a career, if you’re not there already, so each month I will be sharing the top three stories in full as well as a list of ‘honourable mentions’ so if you’re on the list, you can add this to your CV. If you’re not mentioned, don’t lose heart. In another batch you could have been.
WINNER (receives a 1500-word editing credit or 30 minutes mentoring as well as free access to one of my creative writing academy’s paid courses)
Julian Cadman with ‘When Tough Cookies Crumble’
Filling the washing machine, she pauses.
Collar.
Red lipstick.
Worst suspicions confirmed.
Later that evening, Sarah opens the Christmas biscuits tin and selects from the untouched bottom layer.
Unnoticed, her daughter stands behind her.
“Daddy says that’s cheating.”
Sarah scoffs. “Well, Daddy knows best.”
And puts the lid on it.
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SECOND (receives a 1000-word editing credit or 20 minutes mentoring as well as free access to one of my creative writing academy’s paid courses)
Tierney Dela Torre with ‘End of an Era’
Shiny presents sit nestled beneath decorated boughs whose needles have made their way to my home’s furthest reaches. Everything in its place, save for me in bed. With sunrise threatening, I remember my final task.
As I bite the cookie, my son’s small gasp steals the moment’s sweetness.
“Mama… Santa?”
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THIRD (receives a 500-word editing credit or 10 minutes mentoring as well as free access to one of my creative writing academy’s paid courses)
Bob Turvey with ‘A Piece of Cake’
“M’lud, we have won our case by showing that Jaffa Cakes are indeed cakes, since they harden when left. Biscuits, on the other hand, go soft. As cakes, they are exempt from VAT. I hope you will not think we are taking the biscuit when we ask for our costs.”
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HONOURABLE MENTIONS – in alphabetical order (winning free access to one of my creative writing academy’s paid courses)
- Darren York with ‘Shades of Green’
- Paul Mastaglio with ‘Forget The Starter, Skip To The Mains!’
- Robert Burns with ‘Grand Entrance’
- Tamsin Liddell with ‘The Biscuit Week Heist’
- Valerie Fish with ‘Happy Retirement?’
Congratulations everyone.