I wrote this story a couple of years ago, as a follow-up from a d’Verse Poets Pub flash fiction prompt. It is the story of Old George who makes one last hunting trip. While up on the mountain he gets caught in a snowstorm and has to spend the night in a cave. In the night George encounters a mountain lion, as the adventure continues.
In The Climb part II, he takes his young friend Jim back to visit the cave where he spent the night. There are some good life-lessons learned as the two friends make the climb up the mountain.
A great story for both adolescents and adults.
Inspiration takes
life experiences and
turns them into stories
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Posting this for Open Link night on d’Verse Poets Pub.
Today at d’Verse, De Jackson asked us to write a Quadrille (44 words) using the word smile. I decided to do a follow-up to the following post I did back in the beginning of November where I took the half-dead leaves of the Aloe Vera plant and cut them up to feed the healthy ones. It seems to have worked as you can see. The dead leaves seem to make good fertilizer for the Aloe plant. I repotted the Poinsettia which gave it a boost as well.
After watching a mother in Minneapolis shot by ICE agents on the evening news, it seems to me there are better ways to handle confrontational situations, than killing someone. In this situation if they wanted to stop her from driving away, why not just shoot out the tires. That would immediately neutralize the situation. This was not a violent criminal. This was a mother exercising her right to protest. I believe law enforcement needs to rethink their use of deadly force and use alternatives to killing a person in confrontational situations.
It was the summer I turned seven years old when Mom got sick
Pains deep in her abdomen were sharp and intense
She took two Bufferin (aspirin) tablets and hoped it would pass
(We only went to the doctor in extreme situations)
After two days my father called our family doctor, Dr. Messmore
Back then doctors made house calls in extreme cases
and, to deliver babies or when the patient was too sick to go the office.
All of my siblings, except for the youngest, and I were born at home
Her bedroom was just off the kitchen and the living room
Mom was in her bed with its large wooden headboard and footboard
Beside the bed was a wooden dresser with six drawers and a large mirror
A large wooden chifforobe with double doors stood against the back wall
This is where my father hung his white dress shirts with no collar
Being a minister he wore a stiff white collar with a copper collar button
to hold it in place. His black suit had a button-to-the top plain coat
(Very similar to what a priest might wear)
Off to the side sat a white porcelain coated chamber pot with a lid
Our only bathroom was upstairs // much too far to go in the middle of the night
Doctor Messmore, a tall sturdy man with a fedora, arrived with his black leather bag
After examining her, he told my father she had appendicitis and was very sick
She was running a high temperature, and he feared it was ruptured
A trip to the hospital was required to control the infection and remove it
David Honsaker, our local funeral director, was called to transport her
Back in those days our small town had no rescue squad or EMTs
so, the hearse served for funerals and as an ambulance when needed
His black Cadillac Hearse soon pulled up turning around in the driveway
parking along the road by our front steps
Two sets of steps lead up to the wide front porch of the house
A large white wooden swing hung from the ceiling on two chains
I sat on the stair steps watching through the banisters as mom was lifted
onto a gurney with large wobbly wheels and then wheeled through
the living room with its large wide armed couch and chair that
we got from my grandparents when they got a new set
Being only seven years old I did not know what to think as they
carefully carried her down the steps and loaded her into
the back of the hearse that had windows on each side that
read: Honsaker’s Funeral Home – Masontown, Pa
The wide back door swung shut and the engine roared to life
The sharp peeked red brake lights on the 53 Cadillac blinked on as they
were ready to carry her to the Hospital in Uniontown, fifteen miles away
As my brothers, sister and I watched the hearse pull away
we all wondered what would happen to us without a mother
We hoped she would be alright, but she was deathly sick
The infection had spread all through her abdomen
Would she survive // only time would tell
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Posting for Dora’s d’Verse Poets Pub prompt to write a story poem in the style of Elizabeth Bishop:
“I’d like you to dip your word-brush into Bishop’s poetic inkpot, as it were, consciously incorporating accuracy (detail), spontaneity (immediacy), and mystery (revelation) to write your own original poem.”
This is a true event from my childhood that left an indelible memory in my brain. My mother survived the appendicitis and lived to be 93! An interesting side note: My father fell off a limb on the neighbor’s apple tree the next week and fractured three vertebrae! They both ended up in the hospital at the same time! He wore a brace for several weeks and healed up with no side effects!
We enjoyed the Christmas season, attending some of the events offered by our church, I noticed that a lot more people come to church at this time of the year. Many come for the celebration, others for the spiritual connection it represents.
I find it interesting that seekers come to sacred spaces to find a God connection. On epiphany we remember the coming of the Wise Men looking for a King only to find the Christ Child, a totally different kind. They found God in human form and celebrated his divinity!
When we attend church to find connection with God, we need only look at the person in the pew beside us, for it is there that the God connection is really found.
Looking for God’ s grace
Seeking the intangible
Finding our neighbor
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Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Posting for Haibun Monday at d’Verse Epiphany prompt.