I just watched a video put on by LinkedIn’s marketing team. The topic was “Creative + Targeting Alignment”. One of the themes of this exceeding long presentation was to find the pain point of your target and offer yourself up as a pain relief remedy. Well, the video certainly found my pain point but it failed to offer me any pain relief. In fact, it aggravated it.
Ryann did most of the talking. That was not the problem. She is a good speaker. The problem was that while she was talking, she also showed texts in tiny prints and cheesy cliparts. She was asking the audience to listen to her talk while reading a bunch of barely readable text on the screen. This was very distracting.
People generally can read a lot faster than listening to a speaker. So while she was droning on about her second of seven points on the screen, I was already reading the sixth point. This was like watching “Gone with the Wind” when they also splash the text from the novel on the movie screen. You are expected to watch and listen to the movie while reading the book simultaneously? I don’t think so.
A presentation is literally a conversation with the audience.
When was the last time when you were having a nice personal conversation with a friend at the coffee shop and your friend held up a piece of paper with bunch of tiny text next to her face while she talked? Never, I hope.
Two minutes into Ryann’s presentation, I had to either mute her voice or look away from the screen. I simply could not listen to her AND read the tiny prints SIMULTANEOUSLY.
Her lengthy presentation (an assault on both our visual and auditory senses) garnered about 140 likes. I am sure she would tell her boss that it was a great success. But if there were a dislike or angry emoji, she would probably get over a thousand of them – assuming more than a thousand people suffered through her all-too-lengthy presentation. I had to quit after 30 minutes of her sensory bombardment since I was starting to get a headache.
Many speakers fail to grasp the concept that the focus of a presentation should be ON the speaker. Splashing some tiny barely readable prints on the screen distracts the audience who will then try to read those prints instead of listening to the speaker.
You can EITHER talk to the audience OR show them texts to read. But you CANNOT do BOTH effectively.













